英文作文修改技巧解析

　　一、英語(yǔ)作文的等級(jí)

　　四檔文：內(nèi)容不完整，語(yǔ)言表述錯(cuò)誤很多，不能完整地表達(dá)思想�？傻�0-2分

　　三檔文：內(nèi)容完整，重點(diǎn)描述合理，但表述不充分，層次結(jié)構(gòu)不合理，語(yǔ)言不夠流暢，字跡不夠工整，5-6 處語(yǔ)法或拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤；字?jǐn)?shù)不足�？傻�3-5分

　　二檔文：內(nèi)容完整，重點(diǎn)描述比較充分，層次結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰，語(yǔ)言比較流暢，字跡工整，有3-4處語(yǔ)法或拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求�？傻�6-8分

　　一檔文：內(nèi)容完整，重點(diǎn)描述清楚、合理，表達(dá)充分，層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，字跡工整，可讀性強(qiáng)，語(yǔ)言流暢，僅有1-2處語(yǔ)法或拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求�？傻�9-10分

　　二、英語(yǔ)作文修改案例

　　案例一：

　　a trip to the zoo

　　原稿：

　　yesterday way sunday and it was a fine day.so i take a trip to the zoo. i went there by bus, i get there at 8:00 am.there are many people.and some people watched the tigers ,some watched the monkeys, others watched the bids,i saw many animals and i tool many phtos. that’s a interesting trip. i’ll never forget it. that’s my trip.

　　修改后：

　　it was a sunny sunday after a quick breakfast , i couldn’t wait to get on the bus. this is my first time to enjoy a trip alone. varions lovebal animals are waiting in the zoo!

　　as soon as i got there, i was attracted at once. monkeys were climbing in the tree happily. sometimes they even came to fetch the bananas in visitors’hands. how naughty they were! what’s more, i was also intersted in the tigers. they are called “the king of animals”,but at this moment they were lying quetly ,maybe they were sleepy. animals ,humanbeings ,we live in a world .we are family . i t came to my mind immiediatly.

　　anyway, i had an interesting trip today . it gave me a deep impression, i’ll never forget it.

　　案例二：

　　my favourite season

　　原稿：

　　there are four seasons in a year. and my favourite season is summer. although it’s very hot. i still love it .because i can swim in the sea .and lie in sun . that’s very comfortable.and i also can eat some icecreams.they are delicious so there’re lots of thingd to do in summer. that’s very intersting. so i love summer. that’s my favourite season.

　　修改后

　　my favourite season

　　as is all know , there are four seasons. speaking of my favourite , summer comes first although it is hot.

　　many things can be done in summer such as swimming in the sea, lying on the b

　　each … how comfortable ! more importantly i can eat delicious icecream . of course, we also enjoy beautiful views outside. and i’m always looking forward to going fishing with my father .

　　in a word ,summer is my favourite season because it brings me a lot of happiness .

　　三、英語(yǔ)作文修改的注意事項(xiàng)

　　1、整篇文章邏輯的修改.作文的目的是為了表達(dá)東西,所以首先要確保作文表達(dá)的內(nèi)容是清楚并且符合邏輯的,如果段落之間都是矛盾的就說(shuō)不過(guò)去了.

　　2、語(yǔ)法的修改篇章與段落的修改過(guò)后看句子的結(jié)構(gòu),說(shuō)仔細(xì)了就是語(yǔ)法的修改.

　　3、還有就是單詞拼寫(xiě)等小細(xì)節(jié)的修改了.

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